Vapor in the Wind

New nonfic here[link to DeviantArt].

Please read and comment either here or on the Deviation itself. Thanks. 😀


~ by J. R. R. Flores on March 18, 2007.

One Response to “Vapor in the Wind”

  1. At the first line, “The pain wasn’t something I’d ever felt before.” I thought it was gonna be some emo/romance/tragedy story. ^_^ I was mistaken. Still a bit weird though, what *could* have caused it? I mean, clearly it wasn’t a heart attack. o_o Sir, could it have been that you were just imagining it? Hehe.

    Well written as always, find the plot (which is based on a real experience, right?) a bit disconcerting though. o_o Heart attacks. Haha.

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